Comments on: Swimming for Fitness

By: meghana

meghana — Fri, 29 May 2009 05:16:25 +0000

sorry to say but not a very well written article:
1.”people of all the age groups can perform”? never heard of swimming PERFORMED.
2.”pleasurable activity related WITH health”? or is it related TO health ?
3.Avoid using etc when writing instead use ‘among others’.
4.”swimming leads to well rounded fitted program” doesn’t make sense.
5.”butterfly the most difficult stroke” is this meant to comment or inform?
6.”Variation in length of swimming, kicking, different strokes add VARITY to routine” or is it ‘variety’ how come such a silly spelling mistake was overlooked.
7.”set realistic goalS(plural) that IS (singular) attainable” grammatical error.
8.”Technique is improved and fins help to tone and strength legs” i guess it has to be STRENGTHEN LEGS

By: meghana

meghana — Thu, 28 May 2009 15:14:42 +0000

sorry to say but not a very well written article:
1.”people of all the age groups can perform”? never heard of swimming PERFORMED.
2.”pleasurable activity related WITH health”? or is it related TO health ?
3.Avoid using etc when writing instead use ‘among others’.
4.”swimming leads to well rounded fitted program” doesn’t make sense.
5.”butterfly the most difficult stroke” is this meant to comment or inform?
6.”Variation in length of swimming, kicking, different strokes add VARITY to routine” or is it ‘variety’ how come such a silly spelling mistake was overlooked.
7.”set realistic goalS(plural) that IS (singular) attainable” grammtical error.
8.”Technique is improved and fins help to tone and strength legs” i guess it has to be STRENGTHEN LEGS.

By: Chitresh

Chitresh — Tue, 28 Apr 2009 07:50:43 +0000

good tips for swimming

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